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    is a pattern of development in writing that is used to tell a story or focus on a set of related events.

    Narration

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    Being able to narrate events is a useful skill because your ability to tell stories could help you — which is what you almost constantly do whenever you communicate.

    prove your point,

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    STEPS IN WRITING A NARRATIVE TEXT

    I. Writing the Main Idea for a Narrative Text A. Choose a topic for a narrative text B. Formulating opinions II. Supporting the main idea

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    Writing the Main Idea for a Narrative Text A. — Since a narrative tells you a story, the topic of your text must be about a — such as a particular time in your life, your memories of spending time with a loved one and a difficult experience that you survived.

    Choose a Topic for a Narrative Text set of events

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    B. — In writing the main idea of a narrative text, you must state your — about how you feel about the set of event that occured. For example, you may say that the set of events have been tedious, rewarding, memorable, etc.

    Formulating Opinions opinion

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    II. — You may use the graphic organizer below in generating details that will support your main idea.

    Supporting the Main Idea

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    The beginning of a story is called a "—" .

    lead

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    The lead can be a —

    sentence, a paragraph, or even a page long.

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    A good beginning "— " a reader into the story. It makes them want to find out more. It catches their attention, enticing them to continue reading.

    leads

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    Skilled writers start their stories with good leads. A good lead adds to your "—". It helps your reader connect with you.

    voice

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    You can communicate a sense of excitement, sadness, mystery, fear, or any other emotion with a —

    good lead.

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    Leads in Narrative Writing

    TSA - SQF - Q TALKING LEAD SOUND EFFECT LEAD ACTION LEAD SNAPSHOT LEAD QUESTION LEAD FLASHBACK LEAD QUOTATION LEAD

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    Boring: There was a bat in our house last summer. Better: "Quick, hit the floor, " my dad yelled. "Whatever you do, don't look up!" my mother added as I dropped to the floor and slid myself under my bed. It was terrifying night for my family when we discovered a bat in our house.

    TALKING LEAD

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    Boring: There was a loud storm outside my house last night. Better: Smash! The window cracked, the wind howled, and the door flung open. Rain poured in through the screen, drenching the welcome mat inside our house. I will never forget the fierce storm that invaded my house last night.

    SOUND EFFECT LEAD

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    Boring: I was excited for my birthday party. Better: I threw on my favorite red dress and scrambled down the stairs as fast as I could. It was my 8th birthday, and I couldn't wait for the party to begin.

    ACTION LEAD

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    Boring: Ice-skating is my favorite sport. Better: It’s ten degrees below zero, and the river is frozen a foot thick. It makes snapping sounds like the limbs of a tree cracking. A lone figure glides along the black ice, moving towards the city. The only sound is the scraping of each blade as it bites into the river. That’s me doing my favorite sport, ice-skating

    SNAPSHOT LEAD

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    Boring: In this story I will tell you about playing football with my friends. Better: In what sport can you tackle opponents, catch 30-yard touchdown passes in overtime, and sack the quarterback before he can even complete a pass? In football, of course. It’s my favorite sport.

    QUESTION LEAD

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    Boring: I remember the time when I won the game for my team. Better: I could feel the sweat pouring off my body as I watched the seconds tick off the clock. It was as if I was dribbling in slow motion, weaving in and out of the defenders, and heading towards the hoop. As the buzzer sounded, I felt the ball roll off of my finger tips, and I watched anxiously as it spun around the rim for what seemed like an eternity. I finally heard the swish of the net. I had won the game for my team!

    FLASHBACK LEAD

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    Boring: Sally Ride is an astronaut who teaches students about space. Better: "Our future lies with today's kids and tomorrow's space exploration," said Sally Ride, one of the most famous women astronauts of our time. Not only has Ride spent her career traveling the stars, but she has dedicated her life to helping students learn more about space and become our future explorers.

    QUOTATION LEAD

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    A — is one sentence that establishes the focus of your story.

    thesis statement

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    In your story, thesis should always appear at — and it should be restated (worded in a new way) in your —.

    the end of your introduction conclusion

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    A thesis statement is made up of three different parts that are then formed into a complete arguable sentence:

    • Identification (What is the topic you are talking about?) • Claim (What do you believe or what message you are trying to get across about the topic?) • Support (What details will support or flesh out your claim?)

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    Make sure you use appropriate — to link your ideas together and to transition from one idea to the next.

    transition words

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    • (What is the topic you are talking about?)

    Identification

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    • (What do you believe or what message you are trying to get across about the topic?)

    Claim

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    • (What details will support or flesh out your claim?)

    Support

  • ALERTNESS

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    ALERTNESS

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    ENTREPRENEUR

    ENTREPRENEUR

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    ENTREPRENEUR

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    ATTENTIVENESS

    ATTENTIVENESS

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    ATTENTIVENESS

    ATTENTIVENESS

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    ATTENTIVENESS - QUOTES

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    INTRODUCTION TO GREEK LITERATURE

    INTRODUCTION TO GREEK LITERATURE

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    INTRODUCTION TO GREEK LITERATURE

    INTRODUCTION TO GREEK LITERATURE

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    GREEK LITERATURE

    GREEK LITERATURE

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    GREEK LITERATURE

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    1.2 Common Logical Fallacies

    1.2 Common Logical Fallacies

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    1.2 Common Logical Fallacies

    1.2 Common Logical Fallacies

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    AVAILABILITY

    AVAILABILITY

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    AVAILABILITY

    AVAILABILITY

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    AVAILABLITIY - Quotes

    AVAILABLITIY - Quotes

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    AVAILABLITIY - Quotes

    AVAILABLITIY - Quotes

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    AVL. - Noah's Ark

    AVL. - Noah's Ark

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    AVL. - George Washington

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    PP1 - Lifestyle

    PP1 - Lifestyle

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    PP1 - Lifestyle

    PP1 - Lifestyle

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    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

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    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

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    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

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    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

    PP1 - MODERATE TO VIGOROUS

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    HP1– Consumer Health Information

    HP1– Consumer Health Information

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    HP1– Consumer Health Information

    HP1– Consumer Health Information

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    HP1 - Alternative Medicine

    HP1 - Alternative Medicine

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    HP1 - Alternative Medicine

    HP1 - Alternative Medicine

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    AD1 - Works

    AD1 - Works

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    AD1 - Works

    AD1 - Works

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    PD1

    PD1

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    PD1

    PD1

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    SKILL RELATED

    SKILL RELATED

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    SKILL RELATED

    SKILL RELATED

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    HEALTH RELATED

    HEALTH RELATED

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    HEALTH RELATED

    HEALTH RELATED

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    HD1

    HD1

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    HD1

    HD1

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    1.3 Kalamidad

    1.3 Kalamidad

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    1.3 Kalamidad

    1.3 Kalamidad

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    QUIZ

    QUIZ

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    QUIZ

    QUIZ

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    STEPS

    STEPS

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    STEPS

    STEPS

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    A3

    A3

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    A3

    A3

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    CATEGORY

    CATEGORY

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    CATEGORY

    CATEGORY

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    CRITERIA

    CRITERIA

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    CRITERIA

    CRITERIA

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    Landforms

    Landforms

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    Landforms

    Landforms

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    MOUNTAIN RANGES

    MOUNTAIN RANGES

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    MOUNTAIN RANGES

    MOUNTAIN RANGES

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    Volcano

    Volcano

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    Volcano

    Volcano

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    Faults

    Faults

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    Faults

    Faults

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    Earthquake

    Earthquake

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    Earthquake

    Earthquake

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    HD1 - Med Pro

    HD1 - Med Pro

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    HD1 - Med Pro

    HD1 - Med Pro

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    GRAPHICS ORGANIZER

    GRAPHICS ORGANIZER

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    GRAPHICS ORGANIZER

    GRAPHICS ORGANIZER

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    GRAPHIC OG PICS

    GRAPHIC OG PICS

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    GRAPHIC OG PICS

    GRAPHIC OG PICS

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    CASH FLOW

    CASH FLOW

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    CASH FLOW

    CASH FLOW

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    LESSON 9

    LESSON 9

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    LESSON 9

    LESSON 9

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    MP

    MP

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    MP

    MP

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    Paglutas ng Climate changr

    Paglutas ng Climate changr

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    Paglutas ng Climate changr

    Paglutas ng Climate changr

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    Kawalan ng Trabaho

    Kawalan ng Trabaho

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    Kawalan ng Trabaho

    Kawalan ng Trabaho

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    Tyoes of Pronouns

    Tyoes of Pronouns

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    Tyoes of Pronouns

    Tyoes of Pronouns

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    Frictional, Structural, Cyclical

    Frictional, Structural, Cyclical

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    Frictional, Structural, Cyclical

    Frictional, Structural, Cyclical

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    EGGS

    EGGS

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    EGGS

    EGGS

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    QUALITY

    QUALITY

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    QUALITY

    QUALITY

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    MARKET

    MARKET

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    MARKET

    MARKET

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    Wave Formation

    Wave Formation

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    Wave Formation

    Wave Formation

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    Proponents of EM Wave Theory

    Proponents of EM Wave Theory

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    Proponents of EM Wave Theory

    Proponents of EM Wave Theory

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    ELECTROMAGNETIC WAVES

    ELECTROMAGNETIC WAVES

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    ELECTROMAGNETIC WAVES

    ELECTROMAGNETIC WAVES

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    RISKS and HAZARDs

    RISKS and HAZARDs

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    RISKS and HAZARDs

    RISKS and HAZARDs

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    BENEVOLANCE

    BENEVOLANCE

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    BENEVOLANCE

    BENEVOLANCE

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    Quotes

    Quotes

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    Quotes

    Quotes

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    ZACCHEUS

    ZACCHEUS

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    ZACCHEUS

    ZACCHEUS

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    THE GOOD SAMARITAN

    THE GOOD SAMARITAN

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    THE GOOD SAMARITAN

    THE GOOD SAMARITAN

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    Joseph the Dreamer

    Joseph the Dreamer

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    Joseph the Dreamer

    Joseph the Dreamer

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    RUTH

    RUTH

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    RUTH

    RUTH

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    METHODD

    METHODD

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    METHODD

    METHODD

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    A simple act of kindness

    A simple act of kindness

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    A simple act of kindness

    A simple act of kindness

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    E - Definition

    E - Definition

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    E - Definition

    E - Definition

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    A DEFINITION PT 2

    A DEFINITION PT 2

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    A DEFINITION PT 2

    A DEFINITION PT 2

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    D - Definition

    D - Definition

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    D - Definition

    D - Definition

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    d definition 2

    d definition 2

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    d definition 2

    d definition 2

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    Facts of Light

    Facts of Light

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    Facts of Light

    Facts of Light

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    E - Examples

    E - Examples

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    E - Examples

    E - Examples

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    E - Mixed

    E - Mixed

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    E - Mixed

    E - Mixed

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    Properties of Light

    Properties of Light

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    Properties of Light

    Properties of Light

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    MM

    MM

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    MM

    MM

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    AM

    AM

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    AM

    AM

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    PM

    PM

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    PM

    PM

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    HM

    HM

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    HM

    HM

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    PARTS

    PARTS

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    PARTS

    PARTS

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    VEGETABLES

    VEGETABLES

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    VEGETABLES

    VEGETABLES

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    PREPARING

    PREPARING

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    PREPARING

    PREPARING

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    SIZES

    SIZES

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    SIZES

    SIZES

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    Image formation

    Image formation

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    Image formation

    Image formation

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    Ray Diagramming

    Ray Diagramming

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    Ray Diagramming

    Ray Diagramming

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    Mirror Equation

    Mirror Equation

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    Mirror Equation

    Mirror Equation

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    BOLDNESS

    BOLDNESS

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    BOLDNESS

    BOLDNESS

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    QUOTES

    QUOTES

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    QUOTES

    QUOTES

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    David and Goliath

    David and Goliath

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    David and Goliath

    David and Goliath

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    DANIEL FIERY FURNACE

    DANIEL FIERY FURNACE

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    DANIEL FIERY FURNACE

    DANIEL FIERY FURNACE

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    DANIEL LION'S DEN

    DANIEL LION'S DEN

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    DANIEL LION'S DEN

    DANIEL LION'S DEN

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    SEQUENCE OF EVENTS

    SEQUENCE OF EVENTS

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    SEQUENCE OF EVENTS

    SEQUENCE OF EVENTS

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    TROJAN WAR

    TROJAN WAR

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    TROJAN WAR

    TROJAN WAR

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    TROJANS

    TROJANS

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    TROJANS

    TROJANS

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    MD

    MD

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    MD

    MD

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    AD

    AD

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    AD

    AD

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    PD

    PD

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    PD

    PD

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    HD

    HD

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    HD

    HD

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    LESSON 12

    LESSON 12

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    LESSON 12

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    LESSON 13

    LESSON 13

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    LESSON 13

    LESSON 13

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    LENS

    LENS

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    LENS

    LENS

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    CAUTIOUSNESS

    CAUTIOUSNESS

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    CAUTIOUSNESS

    CAUTIOUSNESS

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    OPTICAL DEVICES

    OPTICAL DEVICES

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    OPTICAL DEVICES

    OPTICAL DEVICES

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    COMPASSION

    COMPASSION

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    COMPASSION

    COMPASSION

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    QUOTATIONS

    QUOTATIONS

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    QUOTATIONS

    QUOTATIONS

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    COMPUTER NETWORK

    COMPUTER NETWORK

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    COMPUTER NETWORK

    COMPUTER NETWORK

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    TOPOLOGY

    TOPOLOGY

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    TOPOLOGY

    TOPOLOGY

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    FEMALE REPRODUCTIVE SYSTEM

    FEMALE REPRODUCTIVE SYSTEM

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    FEMALE REPRODUCTIVE SYSTEM

    FEMALE REPRODUCTIVE SYSTEM

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    問題一覧

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    is a pattern of development in writing that is used to tell a story or focus on a set of related events.

    Narration

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    Being able to narrate events is a useful skill because your ability to tell stories could help you — which is what you almost constantly do whenever you communicate.

    prove your point,

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    STEPS IN WRITING A NARRATIVE TEXT

    I. Writing the Main Idea for a Narrative Text A. Choose a topic for a narrative text B. Formulating opinions II. Supporting the main idea

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    Writing the Main Idea for a Narrative Text A. — Since a narrative tells you a story, the topic of your text must be about a — such as a particular time in your life, your memories of spending time with a loved one and a difficult experience that you survived.

    Choose a Topic for a Narrative Text set of events

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    B. — In writing the main idea of a narrative text, you must state your — about how you feel about the set of event that occured. For example, you may say that the set of events have been tedious, rewarding, memorable, etc.

    Formulating Opinions opinion

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    II. — You may use the graphic organizer below in generating details that will support your main idea.

    Supporting the Main Idea

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    The beginning of a story is called a "—" .

    lead

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    The lead can be a —

    sentence, a paragraph, or even a page long.

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    A good beginning "— " a reader into the story. It makes them want to find out more. It catches their attention, enticing them to continue reading.

    leads

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    Skilled writers start their stories with good leads. A good lead adds to your "—". It helps your reader connect with you.

    voice

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    You can communicate a sense of excitement, sadness, mystery, fear, or any other emotion with a —

    good lead.

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    Leads in Narrative Writing

    TSA - SQF - Q TALKING LEAD SOUND EFFECT LEAD ACTION LEAD SNAPSHOT LEAD QUESTION LEAD FLASHBACK LEAD QUOTATION LEAD

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    Boring: There was a bat in our house last summer. Better: "Quick, hit the floor, " my dad yelled. "Whatever you do, don't look up!" my mother added as I dropped to the floor and slid myself under my bed. It was terrifying night for my family when we discovered a bat in our house.

    TALKING LEAD

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    Boring: There was a loud storm outside my house last night. Better: Smash! The window cracked, the wind howled, and the door flung open. Rain poured in through the screen, drenching the welcome mat inside our house. I will never forget the fierce storm that invaded my house last night.

    SOUND EFFECT LEAD

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    Boring: I was excited for my birthday party. Better: I threw on my favorite red dress and scrambled down the stairs as fast as I could. It was my 8th birthday, and I couldn't wait for the party to begin.

    ACTION LEAD

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    Boring: Ice-skating is my favorite sport. Better: It’s ten degrees below zero, and the river is frozen a foot thick. It makes snapping sounds like the limbs of a tree cracking. A lone figure glides along the black ice, moving towards the city. The only sound is the scraping of each blade as it bites into the river. That’s me doing my favorite sport, ice-skating

    SNAPSHOT LEAD

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    Boring: In this story I will tell you about playing football with my friends. Better: In what sport can you tackle opponents, catch 30-yard touchdown passes in overtime, and sack the quarterback before he can even complete a pass? In football, of course. It’s my favorite sport.

    QUESTION LEAD

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    Boring: I remember the time when I won the game for my team. Better: I could feel the sweat pouring off my body as I watched the seconds tick off the clock. It was as if I was dribbling in slow motion, weaving in and out of the defenders, and heading towards the hoop. As the buzzer sounded, I felt the ball roll off of my finger tips, and I watched anxiously as it spun around the rim for what seemed like an eternity. I finally heard the swish of the net. I had won the game for my team!

    FLASHBACK LEAD

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    Boring: Sally Ride is an astronaut who teaches students about space. Better: "Our future lies with today's kids and tomorrow's space exploration," said Sally Ride, one of the most famous women astronauts of our time. Not only has Ride spent her career traveling the stars, but she has dedicated her life to helping students learn more about space and become our future explorers.

    QUOTATION LEAD

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    A — is one sentence that establishes the focus of your story.

    thesis statement

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    In your story, thesis should always appear at — and it should be restated (worded in a new way) in your —.

    the end of your introduction conclusion

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    A thesis statement is made up of three different parts that are then formed into a complete arguable sentence:

    • Identification (What is the topic you are talking about?) • Claim (What do you believe or what message you are trying to get across about the topic?) • Support (What details will support or flesh out your claim?)

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    Make sure you use appropriate — to link your ideas together and to transition from one idea to the next.

    transition words

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    • (What is the topic you are talking about?)

    Identification

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    • (What do you believe or what message you are trying to get across about the topic?)

    Claim

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    • (What details will support or flesh out your claim?)

    Support